I had been on the base two months by that August, coming to terms with my new surroundings as military kids do. The day was a typical bayou country scorcher, and the evening promised little relief. In the distance, somewhere to the south of our on-base quarters, I sensed, more than heard, a din of activity over toward the banks of the Red River. I rode my bike to the base perimeter gate, and looked across a field bordered by groves of pecan trees where a large white tent had been erected, and into which several lines of people were making their way. A loose caravan of automobiles and pick-up trucks meandered from the highway to the field, bumping and jostling and dodging chuck holes and hummocks, as each driver sought a place to pull over and park and disgorge their families and friends.
Plain English is the foundation of effective communications; there is no reason to cover it up with poor grammar, questionable (or just unreadable) syntax, or jargon-laden phrases. Here, we'll root out the day-to-day examples of what not to say, figure out just what the heck they were trying to say, and celebrate those who give it us in Plain English.
Saturday, January 22, 2011
Obama's Tucson Speech, and Memories of a Revival Tent Part 3
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